COMMENTS FOR CLASSMATES

MADISON JEBSON: Praying Hands

COMMENT: Hi Madison! This piece was so much fun to read! You write in so much specific detail, and you kept things intriguing the entire time. I love how at the end of the poem, you wanted to get rid of the hands because your mother in law was passed now, and that said a lot about how you felt about your mother in law. Awesome story!

BAILEY DOREY: The Day I Walked Away

COMMENT: Hey Bailey, this story was amazing! I loved the suspense of having to wait until the end to figure out what the character was going to decide. I also really enjoyed how you wrote about something you have a passion for, because that made the story a lot more realistic! Great job! 

HOPE VILLINES: Pearl Earrings

COMMENT: Hey Hope! This was amazing! I loved how I could totally relate to this. There was such strong imagery, something I really enjoyed! It was easy to understand exactly what the character was going through. I love how her character talked to her mom every morning, which is something I always do as well. This was great hope!

I AM POEM COMMENTS:

I loved that bible verse; it is one my grandma read to me every day.

I love your quote "I am ever changing" This is so true! 

The way you talked about your family reminded me a lot of my family; very tight knit.

I also have two dogs who are my absolute best friends!